6年中考满分作文:我成长中经历的财富_初中英语作文

6年中考满分作文:我成长中经历的财富

曾经，有一笔可观的财富摆在我面前，我珍惜了，并感谢了生活，于是财富滚滚而来：一元钱可以买天下所有的商品；一本书可阅遍精神世界；一辈子可以享受生活……

Once upon a time, there was a considerable wealth in front of me. I cherished it and thanked life, so the wealth rolled in: one yuan can buy all the goods in the world; one book can read all the spiritual world; one lifetime can enjoy life

【名师点评】本文紧紧围绕"财富"展开联想，表达了作者把微笑和真诚地对待生活，乐观坚强地奋斗不息作为"我"的财富的深刻立意。文章以"断想"的形式布局谋篇，开启自如；小标题的结构方式使全文首尾呼应，行文严谨。无论是对往事的回顾还是对未来的展望，本文都做到了开放与限制的统一，不愧是考场作文中的佳作。

[comments on famous teachers] this paper closely revolves around & quot; wealth & quot; to express the author's deep intention of treating life with a smile and sincerity, and striving with optimism and firmness as the wealth of & quot; me & quot. The article is arranged in the form of & quot; imagination & quot;, opening freely; the structure of the subtitle makes the full text echo at the beginning and end, and the writing is rigorous. Whether it is a review of the past or a prospect of the future, this paper has achieved the unity of openness and restriction, and is worthy of being a good composition in the examination room.