考官范文选段:
However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from whole variety of backgrounds for the wider society. This experience should teach them how to cooperate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.
点评:这道题的主题为孩子社会意识的教育与培养是靠家庭还是靠学校。考官在论证学校的教育义务时,着重强调了:相比较家庭,teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home。学校中的老师和同学对孩子社会意识的培养有相同的影响力。而且,在学校相比较在家,experience working and living with people from whole variety of backgrounds for the wider society。孩子接触的世界更大,人的类型更多。正所谓,公正合理两方面,对比论证出真知。
四.引用论证
引用论证,是最为考验考生知识储备的一种论证方法。引用论证,一般引用名人名言﹑权威数据,研究成果﹑学术刊物,它能够增加论证的可信度和权威性。
但是,这种论证方法最容易被考生误用或滥用,很多考生没有知识储备就自己捏造一些名言或数据。最夸张的是有时所谓名言却出现语法错误,所谓权威数据却不合情理甚至荒谬。
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