I myself see no point in going to a fortune teller. First, life is always full of accidents and coincidences, and how can the fortune teller know a persons life route exactly? Second, if we knew our fortune and believed it, we would only wait for it to happenwhen life is deprived of challenges and surprises, is it still worth living?
To eliminate fortune tellers we have to persuade people not to go to them any longer. To begin with, we should explain why fortune telling is unreliable, and why finding a forture teller is a waste of time and energy. Whats more important, we should help people understand that everyone is the architect of his own futureonly through diligence and persistence can he realize his dreams.
The meaning of life lies largely in the process of struggle and endurance. We have to improve our education to help young people fight for their ideals so as to forget fortune telling.
点评:
该文共分为四段来写作。第一段分为两句,第一句对图画进行描述可以用直接引语,也可以用间接引语,其中直接引语更为常见。而后一句是承上启下的过渡句。
第二段首句表达了对该现象否定的态度,而后分为两个方面来说,各有一句话。第一句话是个并列句,后半部分使用了反问句。第二句话很复杂,前面是条件状语从句,使用了虚拟语气描述了与现实相反的情形,而后创造性地使用了破折号表示递进,而后是时间状语从句加上反问句,效果非常强烈当人生失去了挑战和惊奇,它还值得活吗?
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