It is noticeable that TV obtained the highest popularity among the US general population, with a total of 4hrs 28min being spent on it, which accounted for over half of the first graph.
请注意在这个句子中,最受欢迎的表达方式用obtain the highest popularity,而非很多人的第一反应be the most popular,因为这样写从句型档次上来说更高,而且可以避免medium单数的拼写错误(很多人搞不清楚media的单复数形式)。另外,在句子前 面加上It is noticeable that可以突出数据最大的明显性,这个主句的结构建议大家也要熟记。
同样的写法可以应用于2008年10月11日的考题,同样为2个饼图,在第一个饼图中最大值full-time course占据了38%的份额,用表象意义来写的话可以这样:
It is noticeable that full-time course obtains the highest popularity among the employees, with slightly over one third of them attending it.
曾经有学生会这样写:
Full-time course constitutes over one third of the first chart或者是Slightly over one third of the employees choose full-time course.
若以这样的写法描述其表象意义的话显然效果就不明显了,因为这样写的话无法突出full-time course是份额最大的,因为单纯写38%这个数据,无法让读者获悉这个课程是否是最受欢迎的课程,因为也许会有超过50%以上的份额的课程存在,因此 我们在用表象意义写的时候要密切注意意思的合理性。
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