所以,回到我上面的例子。这种方法有什么问题呢? 诚然,它引起了我的注意,但都是出于错误的原因。下面,让我们逐行细细分析一下:
I was looking for work-from-home opportunities…
我正寻找能在家工作的机会……
Believe me, I get that remote work is a valuable benefit. We built our entire team at Aha! around the promise and premise of remote work. But we do not hire people just because they want to work from home.
的确,我相信远程工作是个极为宝贵的有利之处。在远程工作的保证和前提下,我们建立了整个团队Aha!。但我们绝不会雇佣那些只是因为想在家工作的人。
A better approach would be to explain the value that a distributed team brings everyone. For example, if you worked as part of a distributed team explain how you have successfully done so in the past. If you are motivated to join a remote team, explain why.
有一个更好的方法将解释分布式团队为每个人带来的价值。例如,如果你曾充当过分布式团队一员,说明你过去成功地完成过远程工作。若你现在渴望加入一个远程团队,这也就能解释其原因了。
… and I came across your company
…… 恰好遇到了贵公司
This tells me that you have not done your research. In fact, you may be sending this same message to dozens of companies. I am not expecting you to know all the details of our company's history. But I do want to see that you put some effort into researching our background and values.
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