⑥ The profit from the business was large, which I realised sometime later.
这里的which I realised sometime later是句形容词分句,应该出现在先行词后面,不应该脱离出来而独立。如果要用它来修饰全句话,更不合逻辑,应该改为⑦或⑧:
⑦ I realised sometime later that the profit from the business was large.(主句 + 名词分句)
⑧ The profit from the business was large. I realised this (matter) sometime later.(单句 + 单句)
㈣避免用代名词they, you, it影射脑子里的事物,如:
⑨ In Singapore, it relies heavily on tourism as a source of national revenue.
这里的 it 指向什么呢?如果是心目中的政府或旅游促进局,那就要明言,不要用不清不楚的 it:
⑩ In Singapore, the government
11. In Singapore, the Tourist Promotion Board
12. In less industrialised countries, they do not know the problems of urban development.
这里的代名词 they 是不是指 the people(人民)?如果是就用吧。In less industrialised countries, the people过后,要再提这主语时,才用 they:the peopleThey are only interested in their daily life.
其实,在这种主语不详的情况下,被动语态是最好的选择:
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